TEN Tons

Dom was bored the other night so I suggested we both do a sketch for the Ten Ton Studio Sketch challenge.
The challenge runs like this... a subject is picked (by the winner of the previous contest), and on Tuesday the Thread is opened to submit sketches, Thursday a POLL goes up, and the winner is picked. The winner picks the next subject, and picks one of the sketches entered as their prize.
Trouble is the Guys over there are VERY VERY good, so there's no hope of winning, BUT it's a very useful place to pick up some useful criticism.. my advice was to work on body proportions, which I fully plan to.