Aliens for tea

I've decided I'd like to have another bash at creating a book for the iTunes bookstore. I put a copy of the 24 hour comic day book up when the authoring tool was announced, just to see what the process was like.
But I I wanted something a bit more colourful.
Trouble is most of the stuff I've done in the past was for someone else, and they retain the licence for re-use.
Anyway I found a couple of children's books I started, and got to pencil stage, probably back in 1990? So 22 year old sketches.
I think the basic story is ok, and I've started to ink up the pages.
Seems like I've been drawing tentacled monsters all my life...